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This is based off a comment I made to a group of friends, and it was suggested I post it here; I've edited it to be more approachable but please forgive any poorly explained references.

I am continuously boggled by how bad the drop off in video game writing has been. Inversely, it’s shocking how passable and even good it is coming from (mostly text based) games in the 90s and early 2000s. The people making those stories were often programmers with no creative history, so it’s surprising to me that they were able to put out such quality writing with any level of consistency.

Take the Mac game Marathon. There are definitely duds in the writing, mostly Durandal (a recently gone-insane AI) being wacky, but the majority of the writing is pretty good. Even the “computer being crazy” was a somewhat fresher concept, so I’ll excuse the missteps. More than that, the writers Jason Jones and Greg Kirkpatrick were still in/barely out of college when they made Marathon. That’s just astounding to me given the quality of some of the terminals.

The other example is Ares, another 90s Mac game (guess when and how I grew up). It's a much smaller game, with a less sprawling story, but what is there is pretty good quality. It’s not Marathon level writing, but its development was even smaller scale - basically a one man show. One guy was able to code an entire game, write the music, and write the story, and it’s all passable at absolute worst. Even more than the overall story, the quality of the writing on a basal level is quite good.


My question is how did this happen? Thinking on it has given me three main possibilities:

The first is just that the people making games - and particularly their stories - have changed. As the coding and graphics and scale get more complex, you can’t juggle everything as the project lead and reasonably be able to produce anything above indie level. I definitely think this is the majority of it. But I also think culture has an effect on this, and my second and third theories touch on that.

Second is that I think it’s an indicator of the quality of education, and especially higher education, falling significantly. I have no evidence for this, but the amount of knowledge the creators of old had in their back pockets to make their stories feel genuinely vast and deep, not entirely myopic.

That leads me into my third theory, which is nerd culture at large falling apart completely. This isn’t a new idea, but it used to be that being a nerd required you to be immersed in whatever passion you had, often alone. Greg Kirkpatrick admitted he read a ton of sci-fi and played a ton of DnD, and he drew on both of those for Marathon. As a personal anecdote, my recently deceased grandfather is universally considered to have had Asperger’s. The breadth of how he lived is astounding, though. He built a house, engineered rockets, became computer literate on his own (well past when he'd have been expected to do so), raced bikes, and played music. Absolutely a renaissance man in every way. In all I don’t see nerds and the autistic (they’re correlated) having near as comprehensive an upbringing. Maybe it’s the death of reading, maybe it’s being terminally online. It's all just sadly lacking. I don't think I have to illustrate that the barrier of entry to "being a nerd" is basically just saying you are. On that note, there's a trend of “nerds” that are just English majors who played games, which might explain how a lot of dedicated professional AAA video game writers are so bad.

As a counterpoint, Prey 2017 had its story written by its lead developer, as well as some of the music. I think the fact that it’s so good is a testament to the need for a game to have its own solid vision, even as the scale increases. Maybe that’s the root cause more than anything else.


Some additional considerations (and my responses to them):

  1. Video games have exploded in popularity. The amount of quality writing (and writers themselves) may have actually increased, but the signal-to-noise ratio has increased exponentially. I often find myself completely blindsided by games that I find quality, in that I've never heard of them before either being told via word-of-mouth or essentially stumbling upon them. I find this very much to be like music. If you look at the most popular music, I'd argue that it's in an awful spot, being borderline unlistenable while also being more popular than ever before. However, if you take the time to look for a niche, you can find some amazing stuff, even today, and it's all at your fingertips on YouTube. This of course torpedoes a bit of my thesis that quality has gone down, but I'll similarly pivot it as I do with music: Why is it impossible for games at the highest level of production and scale to have quality stories?
  2. I've noticed that sci-fi games are far more likely to qualify as "quality writing" for me. Even my contemporary examples (such as Prey) are sci-fi as well. That's not to say I can't enjoy other types, but I'm wondering if I either have a bias; if sci-fi lends itself to deeper writing, or attracts writers who can do so; or both. Note that I can give some very bad sci-fi examples of games (I am outspoken in how much I find Mass Effect completely awful in almost every way).
  3. I mentioned that my best examples are games with text-based dialogue and story. Perhaps those are easier to write, given that the player can mentally fill in lines in a way that makes sense to him. If you've ever looked up videos about Marathon, you have most definitely run into people reading the lines from the story out loud. I've yet to find a reading that hasn't made me cringe. I'm wondering if voice acted dialogue is just harder to write (and harder to fill with competent performances). But even then, a game I really love called Alpha Centauri has both written and voiced dialogue, and the voice lines are so good that they are literally chilling at times. That's a game from a group of about eight people, so that's an indicator that they just had to have the direction, wherewithal, and talent to see through their stories properly.

Deus Ex released in May 2000 with memorable writing, interesting choices, and a deliriously complicated setting. Between the cool factor and the memes, it’s remained relevant for decades.

Daikatana also released in May 2000, featuring…none of these things. It’s best known today for its questionable marketing.

I don’t take this as evidence of a trend in game writing or production. Our impressions are formed by outliers rather than the mean or median or even modal game for a year. We still get vivid, cohesive experiences from developers with a vision. Have you played Disco Elysium yet?

Realistically, how am I to extract any sort of statistical average from the games released in a single year? The amount of games released is staggering, and even if I played them full-time I could not hit all of them - and if you're getting genuinely mathematical, you'd have to include all of them.

I could play all the AAA titles. Maybe all the AA titles, too (even though that's a shrinking category of games - something I'll get into another time). But once you drop to studios of 10 or fewer people, the amount of games published each year numbers in the thousands. As I mentioned with music, the signal to noise ratio is just huge (which also precludes me simply taking a random sample and then extrapolating - because at this point the amount of shovelware games is, once again, staggering). To your question, I have never even heard of Disco Elysium before reading your message. That's the perfect example of what I'm talking about. I'm not as avid a gamer now that I'm older, but I still do play games from time to time, so it's not like I haven't heard of any new games.

And even then, how am I to give something that can quantitatively measure their quality in a way that I can compare it? I can only give my opinions on games that I have played, and see how the newer ones compare to the old ones.

As I noted in my original post, I posited a modified thesis, that it's "seemingly impossible for games at the highest level of production and scale to have quality stories". Such a thesis, as I said, is theoretically something I could explore, if I were retired and had endless funds. Neither is true, so I can only cherry pick the games which have caught my eye in one way or another. To compare apples to apples:

  1. Halo is a series that is widely regarded to have fallen completely apart with every installment after Bungie stopped working on it, or even before (Reach sucks, sorry). The original Halo games had serviceable at worst and damn interesting at best stories, which were elevated by slick gameplay and unique music and sound design.* Whereas the following games (4, 5, and Infinite) all had serious narrative problems. These, of course, come after Halo had been elevated to a legendary status, and Microsoft could easily afford to hire damn near anyone they wanted. Of these, 4 is actually my favorite, because it at least has a personal attachment to the lead writer. It unfortunately still lands flat. Infinite had Joe Staten (Halo's original lead writer) attached, but had so much chaff that apart from one or two very good cutscenes it was even less compelling. 5 is universally considered awful.

  2. Destiny is actually an interesting example to me, because it's an example of what I mentioned earlier: that text-based writing seems to be easier to execute on than voiced dialogue or cutscenes. That or the people used for both were separate (which is true in this case; the Books of Sorrow from Destiny's Taken King expansion are widely considered some of the story's best, and it's never put in game, and funnily enough, the people who wrote it were let go shortly after). Moreover, I found every time a character from the Grimoire (the written story) was realized in game, I simply hated them. They were awful with marvel-like lines and no reference to the interesting ideas raised in some of their written dialogue. Note that this also got worse as the series went on. It went from having a barebones story that I could forgive (because I could fill it in with the written lore) to one that was constantly undermining its own tension and breaking the tone with awful jokes.

  3. Call of Duty isn't even on a bell curve with its quality - it's more like a sine wave. The first three games are just direct ripoffs of famous WWII properties like Band of Brothers and Enemy at the Gates. Then you get to Call of Duty 4 and you suddenly have a game that feels like a 90s war thriller, tying two separate plotlines together cohesively and effectively. Then you have the two sequels, which make no sense at all but are still kind of fun. Then you get to something like Call of Duty Vanguard, ham-fistedly inserting very modern political perspectives into World War II. I'll honestly write this off because it's so inconsistent, but in my eyes the series peaked long ago.

  4. Dead Space may actually be the best example. It's the newest IP that had quality (Destiny was essentially never good). The first two games are excellent to me, giving compelling explorations of the worlds they're set in and the people that inhabit them. The third I skipped due to its universally negative response, and I feel justified having watched some clips of the story online. Then you get to Dead Space: Remake. A game I could write a whole post on, because it is so fascinating in that the people who made it very obviously love and care for making a Dead Space game. This stands in contrast with Halo, where 343 Industries was very vocal about wanting to change and make their own mark on the series. For Dead Space, they executed just about perfectly in its atmosphere, art, and gameplay, but genuinely could not write the characters. The voice acting is bad; the lines are needlessly made worse; the characterizations are butchered; several people have their races swapped or are made openly bisexual (note that having gay or bisexual characters isn't a problem to me, but they rewrote established characters lamenting old boyfriends coming back to life - a strangely hypersexual comment given that this crew was only established for this mission and had only been there for a few weeks). These people were creative and to my eyes had to subversive agenda. I genuinely think they saw it as a more natural story to have everyone look like southern Californian hip creatives. That aside, someone like Isaac Clarke is just written completely differently from how he was in the other games. EA put a lot of work into this game, and yet the story was consistently weaker, even though it was supposed to be exactly the same as the original game but expanded.

These are my off the cuff examples of games that I have played. A couple videos that make similar points to what I've talked about today, that may illustrate some of my qualms, are the one on millennial writing (https://youtube.com/watch?v=FyHG8EfcA5c) and one breaking down some specifically bad examples of newer Destiny (https://youtube.com/watch?v=NKYlL6ZGvBQ). This definitely doesn't encompass all of my thoughts on this, but most of it is also in the OP and other responses. I could get into more but this comment is long enough and it would require extensive editing, so I'll leave it at that.

*Note that I do consider how I "feel" about a game to be a complement or detriment to its writing. I'm a proponent of the sentiment that plenty of plots have holes - it's only once you're so disengaged that you notice them that it becomes a problem. I will use an art game like Limbo as an extreme example. The story of that game is essentially incomprehensible and almost inconsequential apart from the fact that it is a backdrop for the imagery and atmosphere it conjures. To dial it back, a simply serviceable story presented well (which I consider something like Halo 1 to be) is more than palatable to me, though I will always applaud depth if it works.

The voice acting is bad; the lines are needlessly made worse; the characterizations are butchered; several people have their races swapped or are made openly bisexual (note that having gay or bisexual characters isn't a problem to me, but they rewrote established characters lamenting old boyfriends coming back to life - a strangely hypersexual comment given that this crew was only established for this mission and had only been there for a few weeks). These people were creative and to my eyes had to subversive agenda. I genuinely think they saw it as a more natural story to have everyone look like southern Californian hip creatives.

That's the "modern audiences" bit from one of the Rings of Power producers which I can't now find but did stumble across another article which raised my blood pressure; I'm not impressed by multiple Hugo winner N.K. Jemisin's work in the first place ('the Origenes are allegory for Strong Black Women who get feared and hated by Black men and of course racist whites which is all whites' 'okay but these people literally have the power to destroy the world' 'you racist! that's why you don't like them!'), but this takes the cake - Nora, Tolkien was not writing about you back when he was inventing his own personal mythology inspired by the Warwickshire countryside pre-First World War, so put away your performative indignation about how very dare he not be 21st century Californian liberal and go find something else to be professionally aggrieved over while you wait for the plaudits of how wunnerfully talented and amaaaazing you are to be cast at your feet yet again:

Defenders of the series also say Amazon Studios isn’t being woke – it’s being savvy. All-White casts are no longer acceptable to modern audiences. “The Rings of Power” is being streamed in more than 240 countries.

“They want to have as many people watching as possible,” says Coren, the Tolkien biographer. “So, morally, economically, culturally on every level, it (diverse casting) is the right thing to do.”

Others say Amazon Studios did a public service by expunging some of the implicit racism in Tolkien’s Middle-earth.

N.K. Jemisin, an acclaimed Black fantasy and science fiction writer, has criticized Tolkien’s depiction of “orcs,” the dusky-hued, villainous foot soldiers who terrorize hobbits, elves and other pale-faced heroes. She said they are depicted as “faceless savage dark hordes” that exist so the good guys can “gleefully go genocidal on them.”

“Think about that,” Jemisin wrote. “Creatures that look like people, but aren’t really. Kinda-sorta-people, who aren’t worthy of even the most basic moral considerations, like the right to exist. Only way to deal with them is to control them utterly a la slavery, or wipe them all out.”

EDIT EDIT: In fact, Nora, if any ethnic group has a right to get riled up by the depiction of Orcs, it's - Mongolians. Not Black middle-class college educated professional women:

From the Selected Letters:

Orcs (the word is as far as I am concerned actually derived from Old English orc 'demon', but only because of its phonetic suitability) are nowhere clearly stated to be of any particular origin. But since they are servants of the Dark Power, and later of Sauron, neither of whom could, or would, produce living things, they must be 'corruptions'. They are not based on direct experience of mine; but owe, I suppose, a good deal to the goblin tradition (goblin is used as a translation in The Hobbit, where orc only occurs once, I think), especially as it appears in George MacDonald, except for the soft feet which I never believed in. The name has the form orch (pl. yrch) in Sindarin and uruk in the Black Speech.

  1. Why does Z put beaks and feathers on Orcs!? (Orcs is not a form of Auks.) The Orcs are definitely stated to be corruptions of the 'human' form seen in Elves and Men. They are (or were) squat, broad, flat-nosed, sallow-skinned, with wide mouths and slant eyes: in fact degraded and repulsive versions of the (to Europeans) least lovely Mongol-types.

Erik Kain has a good go at this notion of "updated for modern audiences".

EDIT: Is Nora a little bit racist herself? Or is it that "you can't be racist about white people"? Because this privileged Black woman is carrying on as though she's a poor black single mother living in poverty in the Deepest Deep South, while her entire life has been one of middle and upper-middle class achievement and garlanding with laurels:

Jemisin was born in Iowa City, Iowa, while her parents ...were completing masters programs at the University of Iowa. She ...received a B.S. in psychology. She went on to study counseling and earn her Master of Education ...worked as a counseling psychologist and career counselor before writing full-time.

Jemisin's debut novel ...was nominated for the 2010 Nebula Award and short-listed for the James Tiptree Jr. Award. In 2011, it was nominated for the Hugo Award, World Fantasy Award, and 2011 Locus Award for Best First Novel, winning the latter.

...delivery of the Guest of Honour speech at the 2013 Continuum in Australia

Jemisin was a co-Guest of Honor of the 2014 WisCon science fiction convention in Madison, Wisconsin. ...She was the Author Guest of Honor at Arisia 2015 in Boston, Massachusetts. In January 2016, Jemisin started writing "Otherworldly", a bimonthly column for The New York Times. In May 2016, Jemisin mounted a Patreon campaign which raised sufficient funding to allow her to quit her job as a counseling psychologist and focus full-time on her writing.

The Fifth Season won the Hugo Award for Best Novel, making Jemisin the first African-American writer to win a Hugo award in that category. The sequels in the trilogy, The Obelisk Gate and The Stone Sky, won the Hugo Award for Best Novel in 2017 and 2018, respectively, making Jemisin the first author to win the Hugo Award for Best Novel in three consecutive years, as well as the first to win for all three novels in a trilogy.

...Far Sector, a twelve-issue limited series comic written by Jemisin with art by Jamal Campbell, began publication in 2019. It was nominated for the 2021 Eisner Award for Best Limited Series.

Jemisin's urban fantasy novel The City We Became was published in March 2020. In October 2020, Jemisin was announced as a recipient of the MacArthur Fellows Program Genius Grant. In June 2021, Sony's TriStar Pictures won the rights to adapt The Broken Earth trilogy in a seven-figure deal with Jemisin adapting the novels for the screen herself. In 2021, she was included in the Time 100, Time's annual list of the 100 most influential people in the world.

Oh, that poor woman, struggling unrecognised to break into the Old White Male SF Writers cosy club!

As to that novel The City We Became, well of course you can't be racist about white people. All the lead characters are BIPOC and/or queer, while the bad one is - naturally - a white woman:

On Staten Island, the borough's avatar Aislyn, a white librarian in her thirties, is approached by the Woman in White, who offers to protect Aislyn from the avatar of New York City; they bond over racist humor. ...In Staten Island, Aislyn's father invites a neo-Nazi to stay with them; he sexually harasses Aislyn before she uses her powers to stop him and leaves the house.

The avatars
The Primary: the avatar of New York City. A queer Black homeless young man. A graffiti artist and hustler.
Manny: the avatar of Manhattan. A queer Black man in his late 20s. When he becomes Manhattan's avatar, he loses most memory of his former life as a newly arrived PhD student, representing his role as a new New Yorker. He can allow non-avatar New Yorkers to see the Enemy if he needs to use them. He is a somewhat ruthless strategist and channels the violent cut-throat nature of Manhattan and to a lesser extent the power of the financial markets. He has a crush on the Primary and feels a need to protect him.
Brooklyn "MC Free" Thomason: the avatar of Brooklyn. A Black, middle-aged former rapper, lawyer, and current city councilwoman. She has a child and a sick father. Her power is rooted in music: she can use it to attack and can sense the music in the city's noise.
Bronca Siwanoy: the avatar of The Bronx. A lesbian Lenape woman in her 60s. She has a PhD, a hot temper, and a son, and works at the Bronx Art Center. She is the oldest of the six avatars and thus the holder of the city's lexicon of knowledge. She channels her power through steel-toed boots which she used to kick men who sexually harassed her when she was 11 and police informants at Stonewall when she was 17.
Padmini Prakash: the avatar of Queens. A 25-year-old Tamil immigrant graduate student living in Queens. Her first name means "she who sits on the lotus". She can use mathematical imagination to change physical reality.
Aislyn Houlihan: the avatar of Staten Island. A 30-year-old Irish-American woman who lives with her parents on Staten Island. Her father is an abusive, racist cop who calls her "Apple", though her name means "dream". She can become invisible.
Veneza: the avatar of Jersey City. A young Black and Portuguese woman who works with Bronca at the Bronx Art Center.

I see Nora managed to include a Lenape character, even though they pretty much don't live in New York anymore. Ah well, I guess this is what makes it fantasy.

“We love New York. We have a history there before the white man ever showed up, but the Lenape are forgotten because they haven’t had a presence there in decades, centuries,” says Curtis Zunigha, co-director of the Manhattan-based Lenape Center. The center’s mission is to promote Native American arts and humanities, environmental stewardship and Lenape identity.

Zunigha, however, lives in Bartlesville, Oklahoma, where he also works as the director of cultural resources for the Delaware Tribe of Indians. Like many Lenape, he uses the term “Delaware” — the federally recognized name for the Lenape — interchangeably with the group’s own name for itself. None of the three co-directors of the Lenape Center live in New York City, but they decided to base their organization there because of its ties to their ancestry.

Ah, yes: the racist, neo-Nazi, drunken, violent, abusive Irish. I love you too, Nora. But the name is not "Aislyn" (any bets she pronounces it "Ace-linn"?) but Aisling (Ash-ling) and it doesn't mean "dream" as such, which would be "bringlóid" (shout out to ST:TNG for using it!), it means more "vision" and is in fact an entire genre of allegorical poetry, sometimes set to music and sung. Hey, are you culturally appropriating my heritage there, Nora? Tut-tut! Naughty! If you're not that culture you are not supposed to use it!