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Might want to clarify if it’s a fictional or non-fictional book. The processes can be quite different.
Sounds like it’s fictional, given the potential of a full manuscript request instead of just a sample chapter or sample chapters.
How many agents have you tried? It’s like online dating (for men) or job-searching, radio silence is the norm. It’s entirely possible your query letter is fine.
It is fiction, will clarify in the OP. I submitted to 20 agents and got 15 form rejections. (The other 5 have been out for 100+ days so I'm not holding out hope.) I did deliberately submit to a lot of agents with high response rates, low response times, and concurrently low full request probabilities-- but surveying the querytracker statistics I still should have expected 2-3 full requests if my query was merely "average." Since I can't expect to get published unless I'm well above average, that's a pretty telling sign that I need to fix my shit.
Have you considered implying that your identity is trendier than it actually is? Any native American ancestors? Maybe use a neopronoun? You can stop using it later and if anyone objects, tell them you're fluid and they're a bigot.
TBH my ethnic identity is fairly trendy and also relevant to the book so I do mention it, but... I knowingly and deliberately wrote a book that catered to my interests at the expense of probable market reach. Within the constraints of having written something visibly created by a neoliberal catholic furry I'm still going to do my best to get published, but I don't think exploiting my ethnic identity is going to have much of an impact one way or the other.
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